In this blog post I will peer review Joshua Smith's paper on Fracking. In this review activity I looked at the form of the essay and critiqued its usefulness.
I like to think that I helped the author by talking about how what he did effectively. The form of his essay made the essay very readable and very easy to gain information from. I tried to let him know how effective this form was in conveying his argument. I also gave him a little feedback on what I thought he could do better.
I like usual used the student's guide to address the organization of the essay. I try to focus on that for most people and this case was no different. He did really well organizing his project so I did not feel as if I needed to talk too much about fixing organization. His project flowed really well from one section to another.
I really enjoyed how he incorporated his quotes into his paper as well as how he used the organization to get his point across. I really wish I could emulate this in my paper. My paper needs some of this sectional organization as well as highly incorporated quotes. Without these two things I think that my paper is lacking.
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