Friday, February 5, 2016

Draft of Project #1

The hard work of putting together all the aspects of these blogs and the research that was done outside of these blogs has culminated in the first draft of the first project. This is not the final draft but rather a workable document which I am looking to have feedback on. Without further ado here is project 1.

The Pipeline to Hell....or Heaven

This draft is the composition of many days of hard work, however it is not perfect. For those that are peer reviewing this article, I would appreciate you looking out for any potential grammar mistakes and any places that I could potentially expound upon my thoughts. If I have failed to tell you with clarity what the controversy is, who is involved, and why it is important please let me know how I can improve that. I have attempted to address who is involved, why they are involved and the heart of the controversy itself.
Quinn Dombrowski, "Russian Essay Draft" via Flickr
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  2. Overall Looking Good!
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J-mNz8MCgbS4pG6SxlHPrle6wdU9TJbNOJAYrBoKAYg/edit

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  3. Great work! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W424f12zHun8UcRvilx0NDPNZtZgdbmG6Q6KXbJfxKM/edit?usp=sharing

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