This blog will focus on the peer review of one of my fellow classmates. This blog is the final peer review for this assignment, the final blog of this project, and the final blog for this class. Hopefully this will not be the final blog post ever. I peer reviewed Sofia Haserot's Final Project Podcast with a focus on the content of the project.
The feedback that I gave to Sofia centered around comments she had made to me earlier in class as well as looking at the content of her podcast. I think this was helpful because it gave her the chance to see an answer to her worries as well as get feedback on what she could do better. I tried to give complements and some ideas of what I felt could have been done differently to make certain sections stronger.
One of the things that I took from the Students Guide was the idea of content development. I thought that she could have done several things for when she was talking about Project 4. Her content was not developed very much off this idea which seemed ripe for support. Essentially I thought she should use that as a spur point for either a new section or a conclusion. The mention of the final project seems arbitrary without the development of something off that section. Either way I thought she otherwise did a great job with the way she worked her content in her project.
One of the things that I really would like to take from her project and apply to my project is the ability to keep people engaged. Her podcast seemed very natural and relaxed. It was well organized which allowed my thoughts to flow freely from one section to another but it was also interesting which kept me engaged. I believe that my project is probably lacking these things or at the very least struggle to attain them.
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